This is one action-packed story filled with lots features of myths; I really love the way you included lots of background to help your reader understand what was happening. Next time remember to check your punctuation as it will make your story easier to follow, also it’s worth remembering that ‘would’ is the past of ‘will’.
Keep up the great work
Mrs m
Hi Rakeen,
This is one action-packed story filled with lots features of myths; I really love the way you included lots of background to help your reader understand what was happening. Next time remember to check your punctuation as it will make your story easier to follow, also it’s worth remembering that ‘would’ is the past of ‘will’.
Keep up the great work
Mrs m