Kayshap this was a wonderfully exciting myth; fabulous action with clever use of vocabulary to influence my opinion and paint a picture in my mind. The sign of a talented writer indeed!
Next time try to play with the way you use punctuation to control your reader more.
Mrs M
Kayshap this was a wonderfully exciting myth; fabulous action with clever use of vocabulary to influence my opinion and paint a picture in my mind. The sign of a talented writer indeed!
Next time try to play with the way you use punctuation to control your reader more.
Mrs M