Hi Maleeha, What a great opening and fabulous heroine you have created in Ella. Remember to think about punctuation and adding commas when you pause, it will make it easier for your reader to follow. Keep it up! Mrs M
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Hi Maleeha,
What a great opening and fabulous heroine you have created in Ella.
Remember to think about punctuation and adding commas when you pause, it will make it easier for your reader to follow.
Keep it up!
Mrs M