Hi Gia,
This is a great action packed adventure full of great literary device that kept me hooked.
Next time take care to edit before you publish as you jump from 3rd person to first person, which had me confused for a moment.
Keep up the great work, I can see a talented writer here.
Mrs M
Hi Gia,
This is a great action packed adventure full of great literary device that kept me hooked.
Next time take care to edit before you publish as you jump from 3rd person to first person, which had me confused for a moment.
Keep up the great work, I can see a talented writer here.
Mrs M
thank you mrs moore I will read my work over a few times before I publish
thank you again
thank you mrs moore next time I write I will keep that in my mind 🙂