Hi Mia, I really love the way you continued the action in your story and used shorter sentences to build up the tension. Can you add to the end so we know what happened to Scarlett after the battle? Mrs M
Okay!!!!!
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Hi Mia,
I really love the way you continued the action in your story and used shorter sentences to build up the tension.
Can you add to the end so we know what happened to Scarlett after the battle?
Mrs M
Okay!!!!!