*I like how you added Zeus and also the adjectives you used
Wish: I like your story but it would be better if it was longer and if you read through and added comas.
😀 The unknown discoveries that where then explained, were really interesting and so unexpected.
w. Too short
😀 The cliff hanger was incredible I didn’t see that coming
Hi Arojan,
This is an interesting response to the prompt, I like the way you used details to draw me in.
Next time read back your work before you publish as you are missing punctuation which makes it difficult to follow at times .
Mrs M
*I like how you added Zeus and also the adjectives you used
Wish: I like your story but it would be better if it was longer and if you read through and added comas.
:} for starters I like it but for me its quite short if you added to it it would of been amazing
😀 The unknown discoveries that where then explained, were really interesting and so unexpected.
w. Too short
😀 The cliff hanger was incredible I didn’t see that coming
Hi Arojan,
This is an interesting response to the prompt, I like the way you used details to draw me in.
Next time read back your work before you publish as you are missing punctuation which makes it difficult to follow at times .
Mrs M
your asome Arojan
Now this is an interesting blog you left, and I like the way you added the detail and your punctuation is amazing.
Great work.