Hi Sampriti, This was a great read, I especially like the way you used descriptive details to signpost your change in mood, this is a trick that writers use! Next time don’t rush the end so you finish as well as you start. Mrs M
HI I like the way you have described her 🙂 I like the way you use magic to make her to go back to her house 🙂
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Hi Sampriti,
This was a great read, I especially like the way you used descriptive details to signpost your change in mood, this is a trick that writers use! Next time don’t rush the end so you finish as well as you start.
Mrs M
HI
I like the way you have described her 🙂
I like the way you use magic to make her to go back to her house 🙂