The Adventure Of A Life Time

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1. nanand says:

   May 2, 2016 at 7:38 pm

   Hi Junior,
   What a fantastic response to the prompt; I love the way you used mythological details to make your story exciting and attach it to an established genre. I also like the way you included dialogue.
   Next time try to vary sentence starters.
   I enjoyed reading this.
   Mrs M

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