great use of punctuation good use of adjectives next time use more similes :0 🙂
Hi Zahra, I like the way you told me the back story of the prompt and included details that make me feel empathy for your heroine. Next time try to add more descriptive details to help me picture things. Keep up the great work Mrs M
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great use of punctuation
good use of adjectives
next time use more similes
:0 🙂
Hi Zahra,
I like the way you told me the back story of the prompt and included details that make me feel empathy for your heroine.
Next time try to add more descriptive details to help me picture things.
Keep up the great work
Mrs M