Oh my Rakeen, what a great tale, full of twists and turns and interest detail, I especially like your use of descriptive language. Next time try to vary your sentence starters. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
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Oh my Rakeen, what a great tale, full of twists and turns and interest detail, I especially like your use of descriptive language. Next time try to vary your sentence starters.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M