Hi Jinan,
This was a wonderful response to the prompt; you included an interesting back story and lots of descriptive details to help me picture this in my mind.
Next time try to use more figurative language to help create mood
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Hi Jinan,
This was a wonderful response to the prompt; you included an interesting back story and lots of descriptive details to help me picture this in my mind.
Next time try to use more figurative language to help create mood
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M