That was quite some dream Alexa had Zaynab! I really like the way you used descriptive details to paint a picture in my mind. Try varying your sentence starters to create effects. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
I can spot a few errors…. hopefully you can edit them :). Its nicely written , simple yet effective.
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That was quite some dream Alexa had Zaynab! I really like the way you used descriptive details to paint a picture in my mind. Try varying your sentence starters to create effects.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
I can spot a few errors…. hopefully you can edit them :). Its nicely written , simple yet effective.