Safaa this is a fabulously imaginative response to the prompt; I really loved the way you included dialogue into your story and thought to draw me into the action, next time remember to edit before you publish as I can see some errors.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Safaa this is a fabulously imaginative response to the prompt; I really loved the way you included dialogue into your story and thought to draw me into the action, next time remember to edit before you publish as I can see some errors.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M