Well done Mia , you’ve included the back story of the picture and made me feel empathy for your heroine. Remember to check your punctuation, I can see you have missed some out. Keep up the writing. Mrs M
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Well done Mia , you’ve included the back story of the picture and made me feel empathy for your heroine. Remember to check your punctuation, I can see you have missed some out.
Keep up the writing.
Mrs M
thanks for commenting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!