STAR: I REALLY LIKE THIS I LIKE WHEN YOU USED THE ADJECTIVES STAR: I ALSO LIKED WHEN YOU REPEATED VERSES AGAIN WISH: YOU USED FALL ASLEEP TWICE SO TRY USE DIFFERENT WORD BUT I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM
HAFSA
*Your blanket sure means a lot to you *I love your description – maybe next time you could make it rhyme xx 🙂
Cool thanks for the feedback, next time I will try to make it rhyme!
wow pav that was amazing I love how respectively put in a different starter for each verse to impove maybe add some more really good words
OK thanks for the feedback next time I will add better words.
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STAR: I REALLY LIKE THIS I LIKE WHEN YOU USED THE ADJECTIVES
STAR: I ALSO LIKED WHEN YOU REPEATED VERSES AGAIN
WISH: YOU USED FALL ASLEEP TWICE SO TRY USE DIFFERENT WORD BUT I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM
HAFSA
*Your blanket sure means a lot to you
*I love your description
– maybe next time you could make it rhyme
xx
🙂
Cool thanks for the feedback, next time I will try to make it rhyme!
wow pav that was amazing
I love how respectively put in a different starter for each verse
to impove maybe add some more really good words
OK thanks for the feedback next time I will add better words.