STAR: I LIKE HOW YOU USED ADJECTIVES BEFORE THE MAIN THING YOU’RE TALKING ABOUT
STAR: I LIKE YOUR EMOTIVE LANGUAGE
WISH: MAYBE YOU COULD USE SOMETHING DIFFERENT THEN VERMILLION TWICE
This is great Zahra! I love your ideas!
However, if you were to make it better you could write the same things but shorten the lines!
Overall I think this poem is fantastic!
Pavan
STAR: I LIKE HOW YOU USED ADJECTIVES BEFORE THE MAIN THING YOU’RE TALKING ABOUT
STAR: I LIKE YOUR EMOTIVE LANGUAGE
WISH: MAYBE YOU COULD USE SOMETHING DIFFERENT THEN VERMILLION TWICE
HAFSA
wow!
that was so good I seriously loved that I liked how you described your blanket by roha
This is great Zahra! I love your ideas!
However, if you were to make it better you could write the same things but shorten the lines!
Overall I think this poem is fantastic!
Pavan
✴wow Zahra that is amazing
✴I like how you used it repetitively d