STAR: I LIKE YOUR RHYMING IT REALLY DESCRIBES THE MAIN THING STAR: I LIKE YOUR EMOTIVE LANGUAGE WISH: WHY DON’T YOU USE A BIT OF RHYMING AND A BIT OF NO RHYMING
HAFSA
Hi Rakeen, You’ve organised your poem well. Think about meaning before rhyme. Mrs M
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STAR: I LIKE YOUR RHYMING IT REALLY DESCRIBES THE MAIN THING
STAR: I LIKE YOUR EMOTIVE LANGUAGE
WISH: WHY DON’T YOU USE A BIT OF RHYMING AND A BIT OF NO RHYMING
HAFSA
Hi Rakeen,
You’ve organised your poem well.
Think about meaning before rhyme.
Mrs M