wow very good rhyming I really liked your work 🙂 you should use similies to make your work better apart from that it was very good:) 🙂 :)!
🙂
Hi Junior, You’ve sued lots of rhyme to create a powerful impression of your blanket. Remember you don’t always need to rhyme.
I love the rhyming and it is very nice. I can clearly tell that you can’t live without it!
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wow very good rhyming I really liked your work 🙂
you should use similies to make your work better apart from that it was very good:) 🙂 :)!
🙂
Hi Junior,
You’ve sued lots of rhyme to create a powerful impression of your blanket.
Remember you don’t always need to rhyme.
I love the rhyming and it is very nice. I can clearly tell that you can’t live without it!