Hi Safaa, You have structured your poem really clearly and used repetition to great effect. Next time read it back and add in commas when you want your reader to pause. A powerful poem, well done.
Well done! I love that you explained every single detail and you clearly love your blanket!
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Hi Safaa,
You have structured your poem really clearly and used repetition to great effect. Next time read it back and add in commas when you want your reader to pause.
A powerful poem, well done.
Well done! I love that you explained every single detail and you clearly love your blanket!