oh my, LEON. You have very good description and ideas.Next time do not ask me for help because you are capable of doing by yourself.
WELL DONE!!!
STAR:4 Stars, it was really good but as a LION BEING FED!!!!!!!!!
WISH: You should describe how your blanket looks because, you described how you fell but not how it looks and why do you love it so much???
IVA
Hi Leon, What a fab blanket you have! I love the way you used similes and feelings to create a clear impression of your blanket, in this well structured poem. Keep up the great work, I enjoyed reading this.
I love this, I used to use blankets to make dens or superhero capes!
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oh my, LEON. You have very good description and ideas.Next time do not ask me for help because you are capable of doing by yourself.
WELL DONE!!!
STAR:4 Stars, it was really good but as a LION BEING FED!!!!!!!!!
WISH: You should describe how your blanket looks because, you described how you fell but not how it looks and why do you love it so much???
IVA
Hi Leon,
What a fab blanket you have! I love the way you used similes and feelings to create a clear impression of your blanket, in this well structured poem.
Keep up the great work, I enjoyed reading this.
I love this, I used to use blankets to make dens or superhero capes!