VERY GOOD WRITING AND VOCABULARY!GREAT JOB!AMAZING!
I like your words !!!
THAT IS MIND BLOWING, IT MAKES ME WANT TO READ MORE AND REALLY GOOD USE OF DESRCRIPTION FROM MICAH
WOW!!!! THIS IS AMAZING WRITING I LIKE HOW YOU USED SO MUCH DESCRIPTION AND ADJECTIVES YOU ALSO WROTE ABOUT HOW HE LOOKS AND HOW HIS ACTIONS ARE DONE
FROM HAFSA 5B
Wow it is amazing love the description, I really liked it well done
Great descriptive writing, it’s so out of the world with amazing adjectives
perva, I love your description.
wow that is some good disciption
You are very descriptive when you are writing
This is next time you should vary sentence structures to make effects
wow that is some good description
wow that is some good description. make sure you vary your sentence structures more:D
doosh
This is a really good piece of writing, you used lots of fantastic description. well done it is really good
I liked your description. I liked your descriptive words. I think you put a bit to much description.
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!that was an amazing piece of writing I am so amazed! I would love to read more of your writing FANTASTIC! well done :0 so mind blowing
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VERY GOOD WRITING AND VOCABULARY!GREAT JOB!AMAZING!
I like your words !!!
THAT IS MIND BLOWING, IT MAKES ME WANT TO READ MORE AND REALLY GOOD USE OF DESRCRIPTION
FROM MICAH
WOW!!!! THIS IS AMAZING WRITING I LIKE HOW YOU USED SO MUCH DESCRIPTION AND ADJECTIVES YOU ALSO WROTE ABOUT HOW HE LOOKS AND HOW HIS ACTIONS ARE DONE
FROM HAFSA 5B
Wow it is amazing love the description, I really liked it well done
perva, I love your description.
wow that is some good disciption
You are very descriptive when you are writing
This is
next time you should vary sentence structures to make effects
wow that is some good description
wow that is some good description. make sure you vary your sentence structures more:D
wow that is some good description. make sure you vary your sentence structures more:D
doosh
This is a really good piece of writing, you used lots of fantastic description. well done it is really good
I liked your description.
I liked your descriptive words.
I think you put a bit to much description.
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!that was an amazing piece of writing I am so amazed! I would love to read more of your writing FANTASTIC! well done

:0 so mind blowing