the wizard of lightening

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9 Responses to the wizard of lightening

  1. bhuiz says:

    I like your use of adjectives.
    Make sure your writing makes sense.

  2. virda says:

    I like your work but you need to change your font so people can read it:)

  3. katea says:

    Maybe change the front of the words. but it is very good to read. looking forward to the next piece of writing

  4. emmae says:

    what you said you spelt lightning wrong but what you said there was scary

  5. tadik says:

    I like your ideas and similes, make sure it makes sense:D

  6. plahp says:

    your writing is really descriptive
    make sure your writing makes sense

  7. chowj says:

    I think you did good work. Your use of description is really good.

  8. chowj says:

    I think you did good work. Your use of description is really good. Some of it didn’t make sense so I think you should go through it one more time.

  9. miana says:

    I like your work and its really interesting and I really like your ideas but I think you could add a little more to make it a little more interesting good description 🙂

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