I like your use of adjectives. Make sure your writing makes sense.
I like your work but you need to change your font so people can read it:)
Maybe change the front of the words. but it is very good to read. looking forward to the next piece of writing
what you said you spelt lightning wrong but what you said there was scary
I like your ideas and similes, make sure it makes sense:D
your writing is really descriptive make sure your writing makes sense
I think you did good work. Your use of description is really good.
I think you did good work. Your use of description is really good. Some of it didn’t make sense so I think you should go through it one more time.
I like your work and its really interesting and I really like your ideas but I think you could add a little more to make it a little more interesting good description 🙂
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I like your use of adjectives.
Make sure your writing makes sense.
I like your work but you need to change your font so people can read it:)
Maybe change the front of the words. but it is very good to read. looking forward to the next piece of writing
what you said you spelt lightning wrong but what you said there was scary
I like your ideas and similes, make sure it makes sense:D
your writing is really descriptive
make sure your writing makes sense
I think you did good work. Your use of description is really good.
I think you did good work. Your use of description is really good. Some of it didn’t make sense so I think you should go through it one more time.
I like your work and its really interesting and I really like your ideas but I think you could add a little more to make it a little more interesting good description 🙂