Oh my, what an evil and intriguingly sinister character you have created ! I love the way you used simile and description to influence my opinion; this is the sign of a talented writer.
Think about changing sentence starters, this is a target for you.
Well done Junior.
Mrs M
Oh my, what an evil and intriguingly sinister character you have created ! I love the way you used simile and description to influence my opinion; this is the sign of a talented writer.
Think about changing sentence starters, this is a target for you.
Well done Junior.
Mrs M