WOW Zareenah your work is amazing. Maby add a simile
I like how he is from some where but nobody knows where it was a good idea to add the pet snake maybe you could add more similes and metaphors.
I like how you described the man.
Hi Zareenah, This is quite an evil villain you have created; I love the way you used precise detail to imply things to me about his character. Next time try to vary your sentence starters. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
thanks next time I will try and put this in my work
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WOW Zareenah your work is amazing.
Maby add a simile
I like how he is from some where but nobody knows where
it was a good idea to add the pet snake
maybe you could add more similes and metaphors.
I like how you described the man.
I like how you described the man.
Hi Zareenah,
This is quite an evil villain you have created; I love the way you used precise detail to imply things to me about his character. Next time try to vary your sentence starters.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
thanks next time I will try and put this in my work