Oh my Khalisah, what a great way to introduce your villain to your reader! You have used precise detail really well to influence my opinion and make him appear interesting. Remember to use apostrophes to show possession.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Oh my Khalisah, what a great way to introduce your villain to your reader! You have used precise detail really well to influence my opinion and make him appear interesting. Remember to use apostrophes to show possession.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Great piece of work sweetheart. I really enjoyed reading it. It is very gripping and I cannot wait to hear what happens next. Well done!!
Mum x