i like how you used adjectives good work hussain roha’s cousin
thanks hussain
Hi Roha, I loved reading this, you used descriptive language really well to influence my opinion and used questions to draw me into your story- I want to know more! Try varying your sentence starters. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
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i like how you used adjectives good work
hussain roha’s cousin
thanks hussain
Hi Roha,
I loved reading this, you used descriptive language really well to influence my opinion and used questions to draw me into your story- I want to know more!
Try varying your sentence starters.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M