Hi Micah, This is a great introduction to your villain, your clever use of similes and questions really drew me into your work and left me wanting to know more; next time check all your verbs are in the past Mrs M
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Hi Micah,
This is a great introduction to your villain, your clever use of similes and questions really drew me into your work and left me wanting to know more; next time check all your verbs are in the past
Mrs M