WOW
STARS: 5 stays I loved your writing it had so many descriptive words
WISH: maybe you could make it a bit more longer
Iva
Hi Sampriti, Well done, you used clever details to influence my opinion of the man. Next time remember to check all your verbs are in the past. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
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WOW
STARS: 5 stays I loved your writing it had so many descriptive words
WISH: maybe you could make it a bit more longer
Iva
Hi Sampriti,
Well done, you used clever details to influence my opinion of the man.
Next time remember to check all your verbs are in the past.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M