Maybe you could have made it make sense. It was a good poem and you made it rhyme.
(: You made it rhyme! (:You used similes! Next time you should try different rhymes!
all of the poem rymes but you have to check your spelling
nice poem and you used similes
nice poem and you rhymed the words
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Maybe you could have made it make sense.
It was a good poem and you made it rhyme.
(: You made it rhyme!
(:You used similes!
Next time you should try different rhymes!
all of the poem rymes but you have to check your spelling
nice poem and you used similes
nice poem and you rhymed the words