Well done I like how you have made the words rhyme as well as making sure it makes sense.
Not starting with the phrase ‘my blanket smells like’ makes it intriguing and hooks the reader on.
Ending with suspense leaves the reader to make up their own ending.
A student from 6E :]
I like how you ended like a mystery.
Well done I like how you have made the words rhyme as well as making sure it makes sense.
Not starting with the phrase ‘my blanket smells like’ makes it intriguing and hooks the reader on.
Ending with suspense leaves the reader to make up their own ending.
A student from 6E :]