I REALLY LIKE HOW YOU USED SUCH GOOD ADJECTIVES BUT… YOU ARE REALLY TALKING ABOUT FOOD YOU SHOULD WRITE ABOUT HOW IT FELLS
5B
do you know how you smell like
Why just talking about food
This poem is AMAZING, this is one of the best poem I read on 5H.
Thank you
I like the metaphor you used at the end of it.
thanks
I like your ideas but change the font and check the 4th verse :I
Maybe you should work on what you compare your blanket to. You also missed out a few words.
I really like your work and the similes but you are missing some letters. 🙂
you missed out some words. you should work on what you compare your blanket with.
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I REALLY LIKE HOW YOU USED SUCH GOOD ADJECTIVES BUT… YOU ARE REALLY TALKING ABOUT FOOD YOU SHOULD WRITE ABOUT HOW IT FELLS
5B
do you know how you smell like
Why just talking about food
This poem is AMAZING,
this is one of the best poem I read on 5H.
Thank you
I like the metaphor you used at the end of it.
thanks
I like your ideas but change the font and check the 4th verse :I
Maybe you should work on what you compare your blanket to. You also missed out a few words.
I really like your work and the similes but you are missing some letters. 🙂
you missed out some words. you should work on what you compare your blanket with.