GRAMMER AND PUCHUATION
WE ENJOYED IT BUT WE DIDNT GET IT.
BY IVA AND JOANNA
look at this again over all very good
Hi Roha, You have made great use of your senses to create your blanket and paint a picture in my mind. Try to vary your sentence lengths. Mrs M
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GRAMMER AND PUCHUATION
WE ENJOYED IT BUT WE DIDNT GET IT.
BY IVA AND JOANNA
look at this again over all very good
Hi Roha,
You have made great use of your senses to create your blanket and paint a picture in my mind.
Try to vary your sentence lengths.
Mrs M