I like the way you have described and presented the prinsess
thank you
Nice comparisons in the short story. Would have better if you could have used mysterious word in few sentences. Thanks. 🙂
I like how you used the punctuation! You used descriptive words! Next time you should not use the word deadly so many times in a sentence!
you have described this very well next time think about how you could make it more interesting
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I like the way you have described and presented the prinsess
thank you
Nice comparisons in the short story. Would have better if you could have used mysterious word in few sentences. Thanks. 🙂
I like how you used the punctuation!
You used descriptive words!
Next time you should not use the word deadly so many times in a sentence!
you have described this very well next time think about how you could make it more interesting