Hi Amelie,
This was a great way to introduce the Ocean’s blanket to your reader. I like the way you used detail to imply things about his character and feelings to make me feel empathy for the princess.
Next time try not to start your sentences in different ways.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
I like this you need to read through this but it was fun to read
Hi Amelie,
This was a great way to introduce the Ocean’s blanket to your reader. I like the way you used detail to imply things about his character and feelings to make me feel empathy for the princess.
Next time try not to start your sentences in different ways.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M