ok that’s realy good but are you the prinsses
Hi Arjan, This was a really enjoyable read! I like the way you wrote as the princess , drawing me into her feelings through all your description and influencing my opinion of the man. Try to use conjunctions to make your sentences longer. Mrs M
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ok that’s realy good but are you the prinsses
Hi Arjan,
This was a really enjoyable read! I like the way you wrote as the princess , drawing me into her feelings through all your description and influencing my opinion of the man.
Try to use conjunctions to make your sentences longer.
Mrs M