You have used some wonderful descriptive language to create a mood and have given me intriguing information about the characters. Remember to use apostrophes to show possession.
I enjoyed reading this
Mrs M
Straight away I spotted a error, you spelt princess wrong and you didn’t need an and after bed chamber you needed a comma but over all fantastic words 😀
Hi Zia,
You have used some wonderful descriptive language to create a mood and have given me intriguing information about the characters. Remember to use apostrophes to show possession.
I enjoyed reading this
Mrs M
Yes Miss I will try to imply the advice that will hopefully include the good side effects you thought it would
Kind Regards
Zia
Straight away I spotted a error, you spelt princess wrong and you didn’t need an and after bed chamber you needed a comma but over all fantastic words 😀