Brilliant Rehana, you have used the senses really well to create an atmosphere in your writing. Remember to organise your work into paragraphs. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
Thank you and I’ll use paragraphs next time! thanks for your comment
I really like this its wonderful love the description.
by maleeha
WOW THAT WAS REALLY MIND BLOWING WOW. NEXT TIME YOU SHOULD WORK ON DIFFRENT WORDS
different words like what
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Brilliant Rehana, you have used the senses really well to create an atmosphere in your writing.
Remember to organise your work into paragraphs.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Thank you and I’ll use paragraphs next time! thanks for your comment
I really like this its wonderful love the description.
by maleeha
WOW THAT WAS REALLY MIND BLOWING WOW. NEXT TIME YOU SHOULD WORK ON DIFFRENT WORDS
different words like what
