Well done you have used similes and metaphors to help to create a picture, but next time use more ISPACED.
Well Done! You have used lots of suspense next use better openers
Well done Liverpool fan you have described Lazlo and his senses, next time use clauses to add effects
Well Done Payet You can use excellent noun phrases
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Well done you have used similes and metaphors to help to create a picture, but next time use more ISPACED.
Well Done! You have used lots of suspense next use better openers
Well done Liverpool fan you have described Lazlo and his senses, next time use clauses to add effects
Well Done Payet
You can use excellent noun phrases