Well done! You used good speech, punctuation and suspense, next time check over your work more.
Thank you Kaisan that really helps =D
Well done Eshan you have used a range of punctuation such as dashes and many more, next time use SMP
Well done! you have you started your sentences by adverbs, next time use other types of starters like similes, preposition, ED words.
Thank you all for your feedback! 🙂
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Well done! You used good speech, punctuation and suspense, next time check over your work more.
Thank you Kaisan that really helps =D
Well done Eshan you have used a range of punctuation such as dashes and many more, next time use SMP
Well done! you have you started your sentences by adverbs, next time use other types of starters like similes, preposition, ED words.
Thank you all for your feedback!
🙂