Hi kit! You had lots of description in your work. You also used a variety of different writing tools
Well done you have used punctuation, next time add clauses
Nice work, you have included suspense next time use Ispaced
Suspense but change the 5 into five it’s English. Kaaruni
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Hi kit! You had lots of description in your work. You also used a variety of different writing tools
Well done you have used punctuation, next time add clauses
Nice work, you have included suspense next time use Ispaced
Suspense but change the 5 into five it’s English. Kaaruni