Well done you have used a question to involve a reader and you have used some of your senses next time check your capital letters, use words carefully for atmosphere and used ispaced openers
Well done you created suspense. Next time check through your work as see what mistakes you’ve made
thank you guys for commenting
it was good but to make it improve you could add onomatepia metaphor similie idiom pernsonifacati
PERSONIFACATION AND ALLITERATION
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Well done you have used a question to involve a reader and you have used some of your senses next time check your capital letters, use words carefully for atmosphere and used ispaced openers
Well done you created suspense. Next time check through your work as see what mistakes you’ve made
thank you guys for commenting
it was good but to make it improve you could add onomatepia metaphor similie idiom pernsonifacati
PERSONIFACATION AND ALLITERATION