dark ending arjun

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9 Responses to dark ending arjun

  1. nirar says:

    Well done Liverpool fan you have used a question inh your story, next time use ISPACED openers.

  2. ahmef says:

    well done arjun u used a question in ur story next time use ispaced openers

  3. husak says:

    Well Done! You have used lots of punctuation, next time use better openers.

  4. paner says:

    Good Work Cristiano Ronaldo
    You can use a wide range of punctuation, next time use more noun phrases

  5. rahma says:

    well done you have used punctuation next time use ispaced openers “Liverpool fan”.

  6. hafee says:

    Wow great job! 🙂
    I like how you used an amazing variety of punctuation! 🙂
    Next time use ISPACED openers but everyone said that so remember to leave a line after and before speech. 🙂

  7. AMMAARIO says:

    Hi! you used lots of short and long sentences but next time include similes and metaphors

  8. kalac says:

    Well done you have chosen your words very carefully and created an atmosphere 🙂

  9. karuk says:

    Well done, you used a wide range of adjectives to describe your setting :-). Next time, use more ISPACED OPENERS

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