the dark ending saffina

Posted on May 16, 2016 by Deleted User
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13 Responses to the dark ending saffina

  1. chopr says:
    May 16, 2016 at 1:01 pm

    Good work! I like how you have described how Lazlo looked. Next time use ISPACED openers to make your work even better

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  2. kulok says:
    May 16, 2016 at 1:01 pm

    Really good but you could have used more WOW words. Other than that keep up the good work.

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  3. chauu says:
    May 16, 2016 at 1:04 pm

    really good you used good words to create a atmosphere

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  4. khanl says:
    May 16, 2016 at 1:06 pm

    Very good. I liked how you made tension. Next time try to use different openers.

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  5. uthat says:
    May 16, 2016 at 1:11 pm

    really good you used devices to create a image but next time try to use openers 🙂

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  6. uthat says:
    May 16, 2016 at 1:12 pm

    I thought it was really good, you used devices to create a image but next time try to use openers 🙂

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