Very good and interesting. Next time try to use some similes and metaphors.
I really really loved your ending of the dark with all your devices but next time good use setting description so its more clear
I really loved your work with your detail but next time could you do more setting description so we know where it is 🙂
Really good work you have chosen your words carefully to create an atmospehere next time try to use more ISPACED! 🙂
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Very good and interesting. Next time try to use some similes and metaphors.
I really really loved your ending of the dark with all your devices but next time good use setting description so its more clear
I really loved your work with your detail but next time could you do more setting description so we know where it is 🙂
Really good work you have chosen your words carefully to create an atmospehere next time try to use more ISPACED! 🙂