Great vocabulary, you have described your character well EG. she seemed so innocent. Just make sure you add missing punctuation and grammar, commas before closing speech marks, Capital letters at the start of sentences. Kepp up the good work!
Nice work, like the tense and description in your work.
You missed a capital letter in the first line.
Great, you left a space, when you wrote your speech.
>:)
Great vocabulary, you have described your character well EG. she seemed so innocent. Just make sure you add missing punctuation and grammar, commas before closing speech marks, Capital letters at the start of sentences. Kepp up the good work!
Nice work, like the tense and description in your work.
You missed a capital letter in the first line.
Great, you left a space, when you wrote your speech.
>:)