Star *- Well done, you carried on the story very well. You have used the authors style to carry on.
Star *- You have used commas very well. You used them to add effect. Your work flowed extremely well and it was very intriguing. I it was a real page turner created by a budding writer.
Wish -Remember to start a new line when using speech.
STAR=Well done your plot is interesting.
STAR= Your description is intriguing.
WISH=Remember to put your dialog on a new line.
From=Imaan janjua
Star *- Well done, you carried on the story very well. You have used the authors style to carry on.
Star *- You have used commas very well. You used them to add effect. Your work flowed extremely well and it was very intriguing. I it was a real page turner created by a budding writer.
Wish -Remember to start a new line when using speech.