LEG OF LAMB BY ZOHAIB

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3 Responses to LEG OF LAMB BY ZOHAIB

  1. Harry says:

    Star- You have used short quick sentences.
    Star- You added commas to add tension.
    Wish- Make sure you put capitals after a full stop.

  2. amina says:

    S: great words.
    S: great speech.
    W: more description.

  3. guptk says:

    S: Great story
    S: brilliant sentences

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