Star: Well done for using first person. Star: Well done for using facts from the text. Wish: Correct your punctuation.
I like how you described what happened but make sure you use your commas correctly
you use your commas correctly, but it is really good
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Star: Well done for using first person.
Star: Well done for using facts from the text.
Wish: Correct your punctuation.
I like how you described what happened but make sure you use your commas correctly
you use your commas correctly, but it is really good