Good work Krish, you have used feelings to express your character’s emotions and reasoned and explained why this occurred. You have shown how Mary wants to change the past. Next time just add some description of your setting and a concluding consequence. 🙂
Good work Krish, you have used feelings to express your character’s emotions and reasoned and explained why this occurred. You have shown how Mary wants to change the past. Next time just add some description of your setting and a concluding consequence. 🙂