You have worked hard writing this story. I like the way you describe what has happened. Mrs Barker
I liked your FANTASTIC writing. Hana 2N
lots of description. Next time organise your paragraphs a bit more
fantastic I think this is a amazing peice of work 10 star work {:
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You have worked hard writing this story. I like the way you describe what has happened.
Mrs Barker
I liked your FANTASTIC writing.
Hana 2N
lots of description.
Next time organise your paragraphs a bit more
fantastic I think this is a amazing peice of work 10 star work
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